Score: 2

"TBO"

submission: Camp North is Dead

date: July 7, 2009

This could use a lot of improvement... I'm not a huge fan of colabs, but I'm a bit confused as to what was supposed to be appealing about this.

-I'm really not impressed with the art work, i've seen toddlers draw the like. +0
-For the most part, the animation ranged from extremely poor to non-existent. +0
-The music/sound design was interesting at some points. +2
-The concept for the project seemed to have very little thought or effort put into it. +0
-My general reaction to this is "why would you want to show me this?" +0

I understand that the premise of this project was supposed to be random, and I am no stranger to random humor -- however the best advice I can offer is to set a goal for the project (how do you want your audience to react?) and pass that concept along to your team.

Score: 9

"bizzar"

submission: cupcake?

date: July 2, 2009

i love the sureal art style, but i love cupcakes. But now i'm sure that if I eat another cupcake, ill always be wondering about which vegitable is it that it does.
I am interested in the videos you show me...

Score: 3

"what the..."

submission: The Shebeats Detective X

date: June 29, 2009

horrible song... the chorus is a bad rip off of a song by Jett, which is an aweful aweful band - and the rest of the song is like random filler.

the animation is decent, but the story and style does not match the song. The whole thing just clashes...